Nyc, Paris, London, Tokyo, all centers of power, control, affluence and success to the casual observer but as the western world slips further into the mire of economic misery the lights are slowly dimming.
A city built on potential, ability and possibility is left wallowing in the worst employment crisis since the twenties.
Yet what we are seeing first hand is actually a leveling off at 8.9 per cent unemployment down from over 10 per cent only five months ago in January. The city that has propelled Bloomberg and Trump to success and Sinatra to Gaga is on its knees. While walking around the Lower East Side and even Soho a bleak neglected look is to be seen among people who hate the jobs they are stuck with seeing no way out.
Abandoned and boarded up retail spaces and shop sales 24/7 only further display a city whose divide between rich and poor is widening and widening. In a recent visit to a Social Security office the desperation of ordinary Americans trying to cope with their current economic situations was none more obvious. Single mothers, retired couples and unemployed men from all over the world lined up and argued their case in the hope of financial aid, with one man in question storming out in frustration.
Subway after subway is lined with the filthy rich standing side by side with begging and desperate homeless at a rate i have never seen before. Academics with Masters and entering Phd’s being rejected right left and center for jobs way beneath them in run down bars and half open t-shirt shops.
As hundreds of young people from across the world continue to flood to this city in the hope of prosperity and success the words of a local jean shop owner come to mind, “get out while you can, we wont be far behind’
This is really good- it would be really interesting if you expanded more on it as your trip unfolds. You’re a very astute observer which makes your writing so easy to read. One thing that might make it even better is direct reporter involvement- the articles I enjoyed most were the ones when you compared situations with your own experience of them. It adds a human touch and also adds extra authority because you’re more likely to know what you’re talking about.
Really impressive James!
also love the title
really good article James!
Just finished reading the article and comments there. Must say I disagree with everyone’s opinion, was very unimpressed with the majority of the article. You feel the need to be throwing around big words quite often when they’re very unnecessary. Makes the article difficult to read. Shorten your sentences and also proof read your piece.
P.S. What are you talking about poo for in the previous comment?
some one made humorous comments regarding poo that i had to remove, thanks for feedback appreciate it will do, i’l keep it more simple and straightforward, appreciate your comments, and i’l shorten sentences,
all good feedback, thanks J